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Portfolio feedback please

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by AaronMoody, Apr 30, 2009.

  1. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

  2. jHouse

    jHouse Senior Member

    Looks nice at first glance. I'd say your columns are a little wide and it kinda merges in to one big block. I'd make the Reset and Send buttons smaller - they're bigger than the main nav so they look a bit off. I also think the Boring Stuff could be worked on more - the formatting of that is a bit all over the place! :) Your bullets at the top look strangely indented - kinda too far?

    Nice use of Danube by the way ;)
     
  3. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

    Thanks for the imput, all valid points which i will be sure to try work on :)

    The Logo isnt actualy Duanbe :p but after looking at what duanbe is, it looks remarcably similar

    as for the boring stuff text, its meant to look handwritten, thats why the formatting if off, this was not done deliberately, but once i typed it, it seemed to look nice, I will probably re work this tomoro :)
     
  4. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

    Sorry for double post, Think i have finished and would love feedback.

    Changes Made:
    + Redesigned Logo
    + Faded background to black, for people with higher reselutions
    + Made Reset/Send buttons smaller
    + Showerd the hover effect of the titles
    + Added Featured button to preview
    +Fixed bullet points

    http://www.imgcow.com/uploads/903Index.jpg
     
  5. VertigoSFX

    VertigoSFX Senior Member

    I think you should add some sort of division in the footer much like how you separated the header from the body content. Just a slight drop shadow to separate the "boring stuff" from the body because it seems like it has too much space down there and the boring stuff to me seems a bit awkward just floating. If you had that divider I think it would tie it all together.

    The rest looks good, I actually kind of prefer the solid white background in the header in comparison to the cracked texture of the second version but that is just a personal thing...the new logo looks great though.
     
  6. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

    Thanks vertigo. ive got a new version, only slight alterations this time,
    + slightly improved logo
    + added text to contact section
    + divided contact and find sections
    + divided footer

    http://www.imgcow.com/uploads/757Index.jpg
     
  7. VertigoSFX

    VertigoSFX Senior Member

    YES! Much better...that looks great. I'm really digging it.
     
  8. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

    Thanks! Going to play around with spacing, and then start on the nex page :)
     
  9. Elekate

    Elekate Member

    Just had a peek at your portfolio design, Am liking it !

    I have to agree with jHouse, the send and reset buttons are a bit big but apart from that I like it! :D
     
  10. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

    elektate, are they even too big in the update ? glad you like it though
     
  11. Elekate

    Elekate Member

    Ah! Sorry I never looked at the one that was updated, just saw, my apologies,

    Yeah much better ! :D
     
  12. jHouse

    jHouse Senior Member

    I still think the bullets look weird that far indented.
     
  13. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

    Hmm, still to close ? I personaly think there ok now, maybe too far apart, but il try re working them, thanks for the input :)
     
  14. jHouse

    jHouse Senior Member

    Close?? I meant the indent. The tab is MAHOOSIVE.

    LOL

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  15. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

    Oh dear Oh dear!. I thought you meant the bullet points were to close to the text! hahaha, Right il try fixking that. haha
     
  16. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

  17. Xenonsoft

    Xenonsoft Active Member

    Like that a lot Aaron.
     
  18. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

  19. VertigoSFX

    VertigoSFX Senior Member

    On the home page, those bullets still have too much of a left margin on them...they need to be pushed over closer to the left side (in the welcome area).

    On the portfolio piece sub page I think you have too much spacing between the website header and the page header.
     
  20. AaronMoody

    AaronMoody Member

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