Pls give me feedback on my business cards


jongkuvrouw

New Member
Hello,

Please give me constructive criticism on the different business cards Ive created. Thank you in advance
I would also like to ask if there was a particular design that caught your attention and why ? Was there one that you didn't like? If so, what could be improved ?
 

eebo

New Member
The last one is IMO the most attractive and had the best layout with the yellow one as the back, but you need to tweak a little things to make it better, first always try to middle the text in the space u put it in make sure it's centered in it's design space and to be specific the name
"ANGELA CORES" You will see it needs to go left a little to make it even from both sides, also the main company name needs to be centered correctly just a nudge down, such things can be caught by eye and give the feeling that there is something off with the design, so make sure u balance spaces and position your design elements right to get more complete and professional feeling, Good luck.
 

Levi

Moderator
Staff member
You've LITERALLY taken another companies logo and used it as your own...
 

hankscorpio

Moderator
Staff member
No problem if it's for practice - we didn't know that. I saw the icon and instantly recognised it.

Yello Media company are an actual company using this actual icon - which is disturbing.
 

jongkuvrouw

New Member
The last one is IMO the most attractive and had the best layout with the yellow one as the back, but you need to tweak a little things to make it better, first always try to middle the text in the space u put it in make sure it's centered in it's design space and to be specific the name
"ANGELA CORES" You will see it needs to go left a little to make it even from both sides, also the main company name needs to be centered correctly just a nudge down, such things can be caught by eye and give the feeling that there is something off with the design, so make sure u balance spaces and position your design elements right to get more complete and professional feeling, Good luck.
Im a couple of weeks late, but thank you very much. I appreciate your feedback!!
 
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