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Please Critique My Logo

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Somethingoriginal, Jun 14, 2012.

  1. Somethingoriginal

    Somethingoriginal New Member

    Hi, looking for critique of online gift shop logo:

    LOGO.jpg

    I appreciate any feedback!

    Thanks
     
  2. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    Any chance of a hi-res version? It's hard to tell what's going on in there. It looks quite promising though.
     
  3. Somethingoriginal

    Somethingoriginal New Member

    Hi, thanks, here is a bigger version, but still in draft in photoshop at the moment.
    logo2.jpg

    Should also make clear, the name is 'Gifts for under $10' so was also looking for feedback as to whether the name is clear enough in the logo
    Cheers
     

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  4. AlexanderPower

    AlexanderPower New Member

    Looks good! Like how you've made the numbers appear like an image.
     
  5. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    I really love the concept of having the numbers form the gift. That works really well. I think maybe the execution could be a little tighter perhaps.

    The name does come across in the logo without any issues, however, I feel it looks a little more like a banner advert you might see on a website rather than a logo. That being said, if it's prominent at the top of the page, it'll look like a logo. I guess that's just context.
     
  6. AlexanderPower

    AlexanderPower New Member

    I agree with Tony on that one. You could possibly keep that but make a logo using the same font and a similar colour so that they go well together.
     
  7. Somethingoriginal

    Somethingoriginal New Member

    Thanks for the positive comments and constructive criticism
    Did you mean regarding the 10/gift image part or more the overall design?
    That has definitely been the biggest challenge with the logo due to the length and 'sentence like' nature of the business name. It looks better in situ but I will have a think on a reduced version.
     
  8. spottypenguin

    spottypenguin Active Member

    Could you maybe play with "for under" below GIFTS (to the same width) and then increase the $10 Box thingy to the height of those combined?
     
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  9. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    There's a possible solution that will definitely help with the footprint of the logo.
     
  10. gprovan

    gprovan Member

    The 'for under' could possible benefit from being heavier, as it seems lighter and contrasting than the rest of the image.
    Like the gift graphic mind you. :thumb:
     
  11. Somethingoriginal

    Somethingoriginal New Member

    Thanks for the suggestions :thumb:

    LOGO.jpg
     
  12. spottypenguin

    spottypenguin Active Member

    I'd maybe increase the gap between the text and the "gift $10" slightly but to me that looks more of a logo rather than a banner ad :icon_smile:
     
  13. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    I wonder if there's a way to use the dollar symbol as the bow of the present?
     

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