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Discussion in 'Website Design Forum:' started by martinm_92, Nov 25, 2009.

  1. martinm_92

    martinm_92 Junior Member

    Hey guys ive recently made this website and I just wondered what you guys thougt, its my first draft and ive already had many pointers in ways i can improve it.

    It is currently only the home page.

  2. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    grammar/spell check
    you're not exactly selling yourself or instilling a client with confidence
    90% certain the adobe logo's are copyrighted - the white also blends with the adobe on the dreamweaver side
    glow behind the web design is making it hard to read
    the menu at the top looks like it's an after thought, it seems to have no integration into the design
    The colours clash
    why would you link to a competitor, having said that the homepage doesn't load on their page.

    Sorry if this seems harsh but I'm only saying it as I see it, web design is arguably the harshest design environment at present as any tom dick or harry can 'have a go', you really need your own site to be top notch.
  3. martinm_92

    martinm_92 Junior Member

    I need the harsh criticism because thats how I will hopefully get better so thanks for the reply :D
  4. tim

    tim Senior Member

    destroy and start again.

    take the good elements from it tho (eg, a good structure) and start again and again. eventually you'll be able to take all the positives and form a super site.

    and learn how to sell yourself.

    just read your paragraphs. does it sound like you're there to give the customer a solution you think they need?

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