I think it'd look a lot better without the sporadic line movement tbh.
can't judge right now without those gone... i'd also consider changing the type to Myriad Pro if you're going for simplicity and an "apple" feel to the site.
It's very difficult to give an opinion without a complete identity.
Without a solid logo how can you develop the remainder of the layout?
This might just be different ways of working, but I don't see the use of completing a layout visual without having a complete "brand' or identity to make it out of.
Sorry to be blunt but it seems a little 'cart before the horse' to me.
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