Need some critique for logo design


wyy

wyy

New Member
#1
Hello everyone,

Would love to hear any critique from you, which logo do you like more and how they could be improved, many thanks!
logo1 logo2
Logo will be for company who's selling keyboards for gamers.
 
DanSilva

DanSilva

New Member
#2
Nice job. I like more the second one(especially for the concept). The first one is cool as well but I had problems reading the "N" and the contrast between the thickness of the lines is a little too strong for me.
 
Paul Murray

Paul Murray

Moderator
Staff member
#3
Definitely the second one, the first is dated and hard to read. I'd either move the icon up a bit to add some tension, a bit like below, or add something to the base to emphasise the 'smash' aspect of the name.

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Aldrin6

New Member
#7
You have done very good job. Both of the logo are looking fine. But for perfection the 2nd one is much better. Because it looks clear rather than the first one.
 
UpTillMidnight

UpTillMidnight

New Member
#9
Second one. First logo is hard to read. But, as for me, icon on the second logo looks like VK dog's nose and I can't unsee it
 
Jri

Jri

Member
#10
The comet symmetry bugs me a little, fixing that then requires the spots to be made a uniform elongation too though:

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vincent007

New Member
#12
I like here mostly second one which is included with red and black color. And first one is not bad but it can be improved like here I cant understand BTN with blue color at first look i thought it was only smash, may be using shadow can be more helpful here.
 
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