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Need Some Advice and Critique

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Tony DeOliveira, Oct 23, 2016.

  1. Tony DeOliveira

    Tony DeOliveira New Member

    I created a logo/banner for a friend. I still think there is too much white space on it. I'm at a loss of why I'm not too happy with it. Can anyone give me an idea or some guidance?

    Thank you
     

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  2. gprovan

    gprovan Member

    White space is good; it's how you use it.
    Personally, to start I would decrease the size of the logo and blue bit by about half and increase the size of all the text by about double.
     
  3. Wardy

    Wardy Active Member

    As above, plus:

    To my mind, if you have full stops, you need to have capital letters at the beginning. If you insist on all lower case, one comma in the middle might do.
     
  4. CKraus

    CKraus New Member

    I think the white space is good as soon as it looks good.
     

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