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Need Some Advice and Critique


#1
I created a logo/banner for a friend. I still think there is too much white space on it. I'm at a loss of why I'm not too happy with it. Can anyone give me an idea or some guidance?

Thank you
 

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#2
White space is good; it's how you use it.
Personally, to start I would decrease the size of the logo and blue bit by about half and increase the size of all the text by about double.
 

Wardy

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#3
As above, plus:

To my mind, if you have full stops, you need to have capital letters at the beginning. If you insist on all lower case, one comma in the middle might do.