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#3
nice doom, I like the simplicity of it, how ever I think with the whole notepad style of it, its just a little too simple.

Too white I would say, your style uses a lot of colour and nice ways of blending them and I'd like to see that in the website too, perhaps in the background, the microdots are a little boring, perhaps making them into bigger circles, overlay a blue one and hey presto looking a little more like your style with the 3d glasses effect going on.

Also the image in "flight" needs to be re-sized to fit with the size of the rest of the images.

Personally I don't like the whole aligned to the left thing in websites. It's alright when your content fits the page, giving a continuous flow, but it feels misplaced when there's not a great deal of content and it's to the left, better centered I say!

All in all it's on the right track but with your style being pretty cool and "groovy" I think it needs a lot more work to fit in with that style with more colour and a more interesting feel.
 
#4
Thanks for your comments!

I definitely agree with you on the colours, ill see about making them bigger/maybe adding more colours into the dotted background.

I didnt notice the image size of 'Flight', great spot - thank you!

I'm going to get started on these changes, thanks for your help!
 

wac

Senior Member
#5
Yeah it's pretty interesting and different! The fruit on the main page starts to repeat on the left on my screen ;)
 
#6
Yeah, i'd agree with the colors and the idea of having it centered.

A few things don't seem most professional with content such as

'24.07.11
today, i did nothing. the end.'

in the news feed does not give the best impression - maybe just think a little more about the content too.