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Logo Positioning

Please not that this is NOT finished yet and i need to touch up the type, please ignore that for now....
Its the front side of a business card.

I really wanted to keep the lone under photography as I will be using similar on the back for email/site/tel

Does this logo need positioning more upwards in the middle at all or does it look OK as it is?

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You need to sort the joins out on the script font - it's meant to flow together. You might have to redraw some of it or at least mess with the letterspacing.
...and you may want to put a 40-odd% opacity black rectangle behind the text - I'm finding it a little confusing / cluttered with all the curves etc. of the text and the background picture.

I couldn't see the first one very well but the placement of the second looks OK.