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Logo Feedback Animaction

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Athos, Apr 16, 2016.

  1. Athos

    Athos Member

    Hi everybody,

    my first steps on this forum...So my name is Patrice, 27 years old & I'm from Quebec. Autodidact, I'm here to obtain some feedbacks around my last work, a logo for a small company named Anim'Action.

    Anim'Action is a small entertainment company offering different kind of activities like Bubble Football, Archery tag, Snookball and others. The idea around the concept was to build something strong around the "A", the first letter of Anim & Action.

    Let me know what you think about it ;)

    ps : Sorry about my english, I need more practice :p

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  2. Athos

    Athos Member

    Nothing here, so I guess...It's just perfect :p
  3. Pyrraway

    Pyrraway New Member

    Nice and sleak. 9/10.
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  4. Wardy

    Wardy Active Member

    Your lack of feedback just means it looks fine. If it was bad you would have heard about it! ;)
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  5. scotty

    scotty Well-Known Member

    Looks nice and I agree with @Wardy.
    There will be no Designer burning on this day. ;)
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  6. Athos

    Athos Member

    thanks guy's really appreciate it!
  7. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    I'm not a big fan of the font that you've used to supplement the A logo mark. The multiple A characters in the wording itself all having the same slant/feel as the mark detracts from it. I'd be looking at a different font entirely for that text.
  8. Athos

    Athos Member

    It looks important for me, to show the connexion between them. That's why I choose to work on the A for anim and action using this way and for the same reason i'm not gonna change it but thanks for your feedback, really!
  9. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    Sure, no problem. Is this a personal project or something for a client?

    Either way, it'd be great to see it without the slanted A? Wouldn't take two seconds to try :)
  10. @GCarlD

    @GCarlD Well-Known Member

    Looks like you have a bit of a kerning issue with 'Ac tion'.
    I'd like to hear about how you came about your concept, in relation to what the company actually does.
    Also, the lines and dots coming out of the 'A' reminds me of morse code. What is it meant to convey?
  11. HippySunshine

    HippySunshine Senior Member

    I like the slanted A's. I think it looks great, but agree on the kerning that CLHB picked up on.
  12. Athos

    Athos Member

    I'm gonna check this. Usually I work with guides, but now....when i'm looking to the logo......erf maybe you're righto_O

    First, Anim'action is my company (actually Le bubble Football BSL, but we're going to offer some new services soon so we need a more global name for the company..)

    Now just to give you an idea around the concept : For me Anim & Action is related to movement! So that's why first I worked on a slanted A. The dot and lines arer simply here to reinforce this idea of movement. This is my starting point.
  13. Awasb

    Awasb New Member

    Its a nice design. I like the simplicity of your work. It seems versatile :)
  14. @GCarlD

    @GCarlD Well-Known Member

    Very, very nice. I am impressed! What software did you create this in? Did you make the J & P yourself or did you edit it from a font?

    The P looks better with the stairs correctly aligned with the door, you've gone back to the offset stairs in that latest attachment.

    Also, you must always remember to check your kerning... look at your J & E for example in JEAN.

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