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Logo draft feedback

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Russell, Apr 28, 2009.

  1. Russell

    Russell Member

    Right no sniggering at the back! I've been working on a logo for a sex toy catalogue company. The client had strong opinions on what elements they wanted including, the 'g' to be reminiscent of a sperm and a heart for the dot over the 'i'. Showed them some different options but they pretty much had their heart set on these elements to be included.

    Anyway looking for opinions or any trouble areas on this draft, agonised for far too long on the 'g' and started to feel a little uncomfortable with the relationship of the 'a' and 's' but don't know if that's just because I've looked at it too long. Fresh eyes appreciated.

    http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/6210/logodraft.jpg
     
  2. ch3tzy

    ch3tzy Senior Member

    After sniggering,...lol...I actually like it..
    the a and s together seems a little off, and I thort that before I fully read your post.

    You tried a different serif font...?
     
  3. Russell

    Russell Member

    Yep initially tried about 20 I am happy with the typeface letter forms generally but the a and s is bugging me. May revisit some of the other options typeface options to see if I can get any ideas of tweaks to I could do to make it sit better.
     
  4. jHouse

    jHouse Senior Member

    Change the font for Clarendon. That would be the sex!! Literally!
     
  5. Russell

    Russell Member

    Clarendon was on my shortlist but dropped it as I preferred the greater variance between the stroke widths on the base typeface for this (ITC Century Book). Think I need to change the spur on the 'a' and this might help the 'a' 's' situation.
     
  6. Russell

    Russell Member

    Small change but I think it does make a difference, what do you guys think?


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  7. Russell

    Russell Member

    Small change but I think it does make a difference, what do you guys think?

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  8. Russell

    Russell Member

    sorry mac had a bit of a fit
     
  9. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    considering what you had to work with, i'd say thats pretty dam cool, prefer the top one.
     
  10. eneyekay

    eneyekay Member

    i love the logo, i wouldn't change it. great work :)
     
  11. ch3tzy

    ch3tzy Senior Member

    Russell,

    I think the 2nd logo with the edited tail of the a looks much better,
     
  12. Panix Media

    Panix Media Junior Member

    I agree! I was expecting something really tacky, but that hit the spot ;)
     
  13. Russell

    Russell Member

    very good...

    Cheers for the feedback guys, gone with the revised 'a' and it's winging it's way for client approval now. Once that's done I get to spend the next week looking at dildo's as I'm doing two catalogues for them!
     
  14. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    Took the job because you get a discount on the items, didn't you? :p

    Good logo, fits a catalog although the entire logo looks a bit pixelated at the edges.
     
  15. Russell

    Russell Member

    How very dare you! The pixelation should just due to the jpeg posted as it's vector. Cheers!
     
  16. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    Well you're not denying the discount :eek:
     
  17. Russell

    Russell Member

    No I'm sure I could get a discount, I'll get you that double ended 'Bully Boy' you PM'ed me about... our secret!
     
  18. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    Can I have two please? My last one broke pretty quick last time... so this time I'll have a spare :p
     

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