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Logo Design

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by SamBerry, Oct 20, 2010.

  1. SamBerry

    SamBerry New Member

  2. nyanko

    nyanko New Member

    i really like this. but it would be nice if there was a greater feeling of motion on the kite.
  3. CTL Designs

    CTL Designs Member

    very nice.
  4. Dave L

    Dave L Well-Known Member

    Looks pretty good but, if I was offering criticism, I'd say that the bold type and regular type look a bit imbalanced. Not strictly a design issue but I'm also a bit unsure of the slogan (a bit twee for my taste).
  5. charlieallen

    charlieallen New Member

    I like this, nice and simple, but i agree with nyanko, the kite definitly needs motion, because your slogan says 'make your dreams fly' you want people to see a kite flying, because that kite could just be laying on the ground.

    Might sound a bit silly and picky but thats what i got from it.
  6. Minuteman Press

    Minuteman Press Moderator

    Nice, but... not keen on the bold / regular combo (as per Dave L).

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