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Logo design critique needed...

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Mohammad, Sep 4, 2009.

  1. Mohammad

    Mohammad Guest

    Hi I just won this logo design contest with this entry, What do you think? Anything I can improve on?
    I spent quite a lot of time trying to keep it simple and the client wanted something that's simple as well as being brandable...

    Contest's Winner got $45 (which isnt much for you guys but for me it is, Im 13 for those who dont know my age) It was a very tough one..

  2. tim

    tim Senior Member

    congratulations, first off.

    the box is distracting me, but the logo looks nice.

    only thing i'd watch out for is spacing- looks a little bit cramped.
  3. allyally2k

    allyally2k Senior Member if!! Think I was still using 'paint' when I was 13 lol! Think it's pretty good, yeah think I agree with Tim and the spacing, maybe move the tag line own a little. Also maybe try it without the grey line??
  4. HippySunshine

    HippySunshine Senior Member

    I think its rather decent, even mroe so because you're only a wipper snapper!
    Congratulations on winning.

    I agree with Ally about maybe trying it without the grey line.
    Well done x
  5. Renniks

    Renniks Senior Member

    Hippy wheres your new avatar! you said you wanted to play :(
  6. Mohammad

    Mohammad Guest

    Thanks everyone for the feedback I really appreciate it and will send the client with the edits you guys suggested..
  7. berry

    berry Active Member

    congratulations, don't buy too many Snickers with the winnings. Lose the grey line though
  8. craigfarrall

    craigfarrall Member

    I like the actual logo, but the box around it is ugly looking, and as said above, is very distracting. Remove that, and I think it will look A LOT better.
  9. h_freezy

    h_freezy Senior Member

    the logo is nice but remove the box
  10. berry

    berry Active Member

    I think the 'Box' is Mo's graphic presentation of the logo design, not a part of it. He employs similar technique to show his work on his website.
    But it is one design element too much. Overcooking
  11. Aarlev

    Aarlev Member

    Nice work Mohammad, and congrats on winning. I'd loose the grey line as well, and decrease the space between the 'U' and the 'L' in verticular. Perhaps also move the 'I' slightly closer to the 'C'.

    Hope that helps!
  12. glenwheeler

    glenwheeler Senior Member

    Nice logo, Just looked at the other entries after google the contest. There was some great designs and some horrible designs but wel done! Again lose that huge square thingy what ever it is.
  13. br3n

    br3n Senior Member

    If you've already won, why do you need crit?
  14. Mohammad

    Mohammad Guest

    Aarlev: Thanks Aarlev for the feedback,

    Glen: Yes, there were a lot of good entries and you can expect lots of horribles ones aswell (especially at DigitalPoint). I took the post image from my blogspot so thats why it has the rounded box

    Bren: I just wanted some feedback on it so that I can improve on my following designs

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