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Let me know what you think

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by yaviox, Jun 8, 2012.

  1. yaviox

    yaviox New Member

    Hi, I;m 16 and have been playing around on photoshop. I chose the name 'yaviox' as a youtube user, but haven't fired it up yet. That's a little explaining, here it is. :) (it's a pc wallpaper by the way)
  2. yaviox

    yaviox New Member

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  3. AlexanderPower

    AlexanderPower New Member

    If you were to make a change to this for the better, try to make the text clearer because that swirling trail that goes around the text makes it harder to read.
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  4. willfu

    willfu Member

    I'm confused on what this is suppose to be. Is the logo meant to be flying out of the planet?
  5. yaviox

    yaviox New Member

    It's not supposed to be realistically there. It's a little abstract mixed in with the surroundings. The red trail is supposed to come from the planet and go round the logo like it has gravity, substance, comparison to a planet, and therefore, of importance. get my drift?
    Last edited: Jun 9, 2012
  6. yaviox

    yaviox New Member

    How about a red version of this beam in that sweep across the logo?: (this is an older one that I scrapped) backgroundYVX3.jpg
  7. craigfoxdesign

    craigfoxdesign New Member

    I think that your design needs to go either or two ways, simplify it or refine it. Take a look here for some inspiration James Levy Studio
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  8. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    Sorry for hijacking your thread, but Craig, your Ted logo...this one?


    Isn't it a little bit similar to this? It looks like you've actually just copied the whole thing and inverted the colours?

  9. craigfoxdesign

    craigfoxdesign New Member

    Hi Tony,
    honestly, no! as a matter of fact i've got all the initial sketches... where did you find that? I was playing around for hours to produce something for them. Funny thing was that this wasn't the actual ident the client went for.
  10. yaviox

    yaviox New Member

    I think this is another 'closed' project, I have only done minor changes to the above image, so I won't post it up. Thanks for the link, Craig. Helped alot and have already started thinking a new piece through in my mind!
  11. craigfoxdesign

    craigfoxdesign New Member

    No worries dude.
  12. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Well-Known Member

    Haha fair enough. Sometimes, these things happen :)

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