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J Rabbit business card design

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Rafael Rizzolo, Mar 19, 2012.

  1. Rafael Rizzolo

    Rafael Rizzolo New Member

    New logo and design for a sex toy company


    Work-jrabbit.jpg
     
  2. bigdave

    bigdave Moderator Staff Member

    First thing that strikes me it that that's not a standard business card size (85x55). Everything looks a bit squashed in (perhaps the logo needs to be smaller?). The lines containing the words "SEX TOYS" and "MADAM JD" sit very badly together, it's made worse by the lines in the background which draw your eyes to the fact that the 2 lines crash into each other. Why are those lines there? the design would look much cleaner without them. Also not quite sure the logo works either. It seems badly kerned and the woman swinging round the J adds to the overall feeling that it's all been crammed in.

    Hope that wasn't too critical... ?
     
  3. Rafael Rizzolo

    Rafael Rizzolo New Member

    thanks for the feedback, yeah i feel the design is a bit dated considering the current trend. will need to clean it up, I crated the lines in the background to add structure.

    why is the images i uploaded so pixelated and small ??
     
  4. Minuteman Press

    Minuteman Press Moderator

    Does look hard to read and dated. Is it based on a template or from scratch?
     
  5. Rafael Rizzolo

    Rafael Rizzolo New Member

    its from scratch
     

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