Hi I'm beginner graphic designer looking for some advice, just finished my second project and wonder what can I improve to make it better: https://www.behance.net/gallery/170981855/Vexus-Technology-Ecommerce-Shop
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yusufzenith
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Wow very nice graphic design. This is a very nice, helpful and clearly stated graphic design and rules posted in benefit of customers. Thank you.
From my point of view, at a glance, it does look like a Swastika.
Now, it's frowned upon in Europe, but it's very popular in Asia, I think they reverse it.
But it has connotations with a highly awful group of people.
Just saying.
I know you say it is from a computerchip.
But.
Your logo doesn't look like this
There's 2 different fonts used for 'Monday' and 'Friday' - and these fonts are not listed in your brand guide.
The positioning of the Brand logo is all over the place - it's top left, top centre, bottom centre - it's not consistent
Now, it's frowned upon in Europe, but it's very popular in Asia, I think they reverse it.
But it has connotations with a highly awful group of people.
Just saying.
I know you say it is from a computerchip.
But.
Your logo doesn't look like this
There's 2 different fonts used for 'Monday' and 'Friday' - and these fonts are not listed in your brand guide.
The positioning of the Brand logo is all over the place - it's top left, top centre, bottom centre - it's not consistent
I can see the swastika links but it wasn't necessarily the first thing I thought of. I don't see any relation to anything technology when I look at it, I don't even see a V if I'm being honest....
The colour swatch feels a little generic and overused....
The pattern image and the gradient image seem like a 'I've got empty space, better post something here' type imagery because it's incredibly generic and doesn't really link to much else.
The colour swatch feels a little generic and overused....
The pattern image and the gradient image seem like a 'I've got empty space, better post something here' type imagery because it's incredibly generic and doesn't really link to much else.
thank you for your feedback, next time I'll keep in mind to include all fonts in brand guidelines. I tried to make logo as minimalistic as I could, yes it does not look the same as computer chip but I think it's okay
Remember you'll come across much harsher and more intense in board rooms.
Georgia is a small country and competition is low, there are not much business either, also almost everybody knows everyone and people are not that harsh. Anyways, I like your advice and appreciate your perspective on project as you know much more and are more experienced in this field