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hey all! Feedback much appreciated....

Discussion in 'Website Design Critique:' started by Mike, Mar 2, 2009.

  1. Mike

    Mike Senior Member

    Hi all,

    Just wanted to pick the collective mind on a project I have recently set loose into the wilds of internet-land!

    the site is www.whatsorganic.co.uk

    Thanks in advance

    And again thanks to RedTiger for the (imo wonderful design)
     
  2. tbwcf

    tbwcf Active Member

    Hi Mike, I agree the design is very nice.

    For me just a couple of things the white triangle in the top left looks a little odd, is it supposed to be the page curling over? - also I think you should give the taps on the nav a roll over effect, perhaps so they jump up or down on hover...

    I particuarly like the subtle gradient on the top left of the body as a light source!

    Maybe your form elements could be jazzed up a little to be more in keeping with the site, the contact form and search box seems a bit like the sites been designed without theses then they've been added in after the build/design, maybe green borders around the input boxes and a nice submit/search button?

    All in all looks like a nice job!
     
  3. Dizi

    Dizi Junior Member

    Hi Mike.

    There's not much i would change. As tbwcf just said, the white traingle looks a bit wierd and navigation could do with a little improvment, having it expand on roleover would look great.

    Overall, a very nice clean design. Good job. :)
     
  4. shaqal

    shaqal Member

    I like that funny worm in footer :)
    And like others said, this triangle looks weird, for me you could the top of this container make in some angle like buttons (buttons for me looks fine :) )
    The rest looks great
     
  5. matt

    matt Member

    Same as above in terms of the 'fold over' (if that's what it's supposed to be); it's not quite there. Same goes for the triangles on the images/links which break up the body text.

    One other point is the Whats Organic .co.uk header in the top left. I know it's a reference to the URL which doesn't have an apostrophe, but not having an apostrophe here looks like a mistake to me. It's more of a header/title than a URL (I know it's both, but you know what I mean), so for me it should include it.

    P.S. Love the the language used for the site credits.
     
  6. Xenonsoft

    Xenonsoft Active Member

    Agree with the above comments, a nice clean design that with a few tweaks will be very nice indeed :)

    The worm in the footer tops it off for me.
     
  7. philjohns

    philjohns Senior Member

    Yeh - I love the design too.

    But again agree with this:

    If it was to "fold out" the page would have an extra shape to its top left corner would it not?
     
  8. retrowilly

    retrowilly Junior Member

    Nice and simple design, well done.

    Like the other comments improving the Nav would help. As well as rollovers how about highlighting the current page? Always good to show users where they currently are as well as where they can get to.
     

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