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Feedback on Streetwear Logo Design

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Hockeynut15, May 8, 2010.

  1. Hockeynut15

    Hockeynut15 Junior Member

    Hey guys, I'm a student in graphic design on an art foundation course currently in the process of my FMP project.

    The brief is retail design for a ficticious street wear company called 'Kingpin' - and I was wondering if you could give me some feedback on the current logo I have designed.


    thanks, Hockeynut.
  2. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    It's to vector for my taste. Do it by hand a few times, scan it, and then come back. It will look a million times better.
  3. Aarlev

    Aarlev Member

    Agree with Mike. Do it on paper instead. It'll have way better flow, and you just can't imitate a good handstyle with vector.

    Here's a few stylish tags to give you an idea..


  4. Greg

    Greg Active Member

    As MrP & Aarlev said above, the regular thickness of the lines take away the loose/flow that it looks like it should have. Can you post up the design brief too? I know you said street wear, just wondering if it's a bit too obvious going with a tag?

    Welcome to DF by the way :up:
  5. Thewholehogg

    Thewholehogg Active Member

    Distress that text...
  6. Krey20

    Krey20 Senior Member

    I agree with the comments above.
    Also I would be tempted to rethink using a monogram. For one thing 'Kingpin' is one word, so it doesn't make a whole lot of sense to use initials. And for another it makes me think that the 'salted nut manufacturer' is trying to go street!

    Good work so far but I think you can push it a lot further.
  7. Tom Sound

    Tom Sound Active Member

    Anything with a crown says Stussy to me. I kind of like it though but I read it as ISP when I first saw it. Looking forward to seeing it develop :up:

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