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Feedback on b cards please


tim

Senior Member
#2
alright tom, nice idea. loving it.

only thing is there's a bleed on the print document, surely, that fonts will just be wiped from...? maybe im wrong!

and i also think that the "and" integration could work better- if you read it you think "yeah, that's quite clever!" and then you realise the "and" isn't relevant to anything.

i'd love to see the texture they're printed on as well, but i feel the colours would just be a little too dark for my liking :)

tim
 

Levi

Moderator
Staff member
#4
Invitation (I assume) is on the right twice but its not actually completely spelt anywhere on the design

I'd also try reversing the white and grey in the orange box on the first side, more for clarity than anything else