Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by TomStutt, Oct 2, 2009.
Hi, Just finished designing my new business cards and i would like some feedback please
alright tom, nice idea. loving it.
only thing is there's a bleed on the print document, surely, that fonts will just be wiped from...? maybe im wrong!
and i also think that the "and" integration could work better- if you read it you think "yeah, that's quite clever!" and then you realise the "and" isn't relevant to anything.
i'd love to see the texture they're printed on as well, but i feel the colours would just be a little too dark for my liking
Ditto what Tim said. re. the 'And"
To be honest - nice idea - but its been done before and better.
Invitation (I assume) is on the right twice but its not actually completely spelt anywhere on the design
I'd also try reversing the white and grey in the orange box on the first side, more for clarity than anything else
I'm not feeling it, especially the backside... It's too simplistic, even if it's tilted like that.
Separate names with a comma.