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Feedback on b cards please

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by TomStutt, Oct 2, 2009.

  1. TomStutt

    TomStutt Senior Member

    Hi, Just finished designing my new business cards and i would like some feedback please



  2. tim

    tim Senior Member

    alright tom, nice idea. loving it.

    only thing is there's a bleed on the print document, surely, that fonts will just be wiped from...? maybe im wrong!

    and i also think that the "and" integration could work better- if you read it you think "yeah, that's quite clever!" and then you realise the "and" isn't relevant to anything.

    i'd love to see the texture they're printed on as well, but i feel the colours would just be a little too dark for my liking :)

  3. rossnorthernunion

    rossnorthernunion Senior Member

    Ditto what Tim said. re. the 'And"

    Doesn't work.

    To be honest - nice idea - but its been done before and better.
  4. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    Invitation (I assume) is on the right twice but its not actually completely spelt anywhere on the design

    I'd also try reversing the white and grey in the orange box on the first side, more for clarity than anything else
  5. Kevin

    Kevin Senior Member

    I'm not feeling it, especially the backside... It's too simplistic, even if it's tilted like that.

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