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Egg Nog

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Inkling, Jan 5, 2015.

  1. Inkling

    Inkling New Member

    Hello. I'm looking for some feedback on a project I've done for school. It's the redesign for some egg nog packaging (I'm originally from Canada, and egg nog is a very popular Christmas drink there).
    This is the original packaging.

    I repackaged it so that it's in cartons which is the most common way to package eggnog. I did this because egg nog can actually look quite off putting and having it in a clear bottle just shows off the gross aspect of the product. I used some hand drawn elements in the packaging (the pattern) because the key word for my project was "handmade".
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    Here is a final mockup.


    I would really appreciate a critique. Feel free to be brutally honest. Thanks.
  2. Paul Murray

    Paul Murray Moderator Staff Member

    I like it. It's festive, without being too Christmassy.
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  3. hankscorpio

    hankscorpio Moderator Staff Member

    It's very classy and would stand out easily on the shelf as a high end product.
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  4. @GCarlD

    @GCarlD Well-Known Member

    very classy
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  5. PriyeshDesign

    PriyeshDesign Member

    Interesting concept, appealing - looks like premium Egg Nog :icon_biggrin:

    I would soften the flourish pattern, just a little.
    And perhaps experiment with adding the raw ingredient image like those pieces of chocolate to the chocolate Egg Nog package.

    Other than that, it's portfolio worthy!
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  6. bigdave

    bigdave Moderator Staff Member

    It looks great and would certainly look at home on a shelf with other high end products... However, I would have to question if the 'high end' finish meets the 'hand made' brief?
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