Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by lolage, Apr 22, 2011.
Hi, drafted up a few logo's for my grandads business.
Any opinions? Feedback appriciated! Thanks
Updated, come up with a few more ideas - thanks for your feedback.
hello mate some feed back for you,
text - try using the same font for both words, one in bold and the other thin or what ever option there is or maybe a diff shade of red,
i wouldn't use the flame above the I and use the 3 flame design together it looks messy and crowded, it also makes the I look like a candle, if thats what you was going for fair enough.
always use a quality font when branding a company, its very important, or create outlines on the text and play around with it youself make it unique, the text represents the company, you need to do a much better search to find the perfect font for fireplace studio
also the 3 flame logo, maybe add a circle to it to tidy it up, it just looks thrown together and doesn't really have a need to be there.
sorry to be very critical just offering my help
Don't apologise for being critical - its what I need.
Thanks for your feedback, I'll have another go.
Nice work but you could use Studio 'S' like this.
Separate names with a comma.