Critique my drink design pls


sourcebotanics

sourcebotanics

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Hi there,

Penny for any first impressions?

Cheers
 

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fisicx

fisicx

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Is this for a real product?

The box top right looks odd. Why have you split the words like that?

Is there a label for each month? What’s with the red letters? Is that tibetian?

The light colour will be very difficult to read in the bright lights of a shop.
 
sourcebotanics

sourcebotanics

New Member
Appreciate feedback.

Yea, this is for a real product.

That box is the client's logo. Yes red letters are Tibetan.. Good advice about the contrast, something I've been thinking.

What do you think about the overall feel?
 
fisicx

fisicx

Active Member
Looks like a medicine bottle.

What is ‘Jun’? Why the tibetian letters? Do you drink it straight from the bottle? Sparkling suggests it’s fizzy.

And the logo is still awful.
 
sourcebotanics

sourcebotanics

New Member
Yep, it is a drink to be consumed in a normal way.

Too medicinal in your opinion, ok thanks.
 
fisicx

fisicx

Active Member
Use clear plastic

Move the awful logo to the bottom

Still don’t get why you are using months on the label

Bin the tibetian letters.

What does the reverse label look like. People check this all the time, watch people in supermarkets.

Is this to be sold in the food to go section or with all the other drinks?
 
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vincent007

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This design looks so real, nice design. Is it tea into the bottle?
 
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