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Branding Critique Please

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by theking79, May 5, 2009.

  1. theking79

    theking79 Member

    I am doing my final major project at college, I am rebranding a fictional TV/radio company called TRN, I have created logo's, leaflets, stationary and a billboard advert.

    The logo resembles a TV shape with an aerial.

    Looking for some feedback on these, thanks.




    Last edited: May 5, 2009
  2. theking79

    theking79 Member

  3. CYoung

    CYoung Member

    Hi, I really like these, the only thing I would possibly change is the colour on the film variation, as its a bit bland, maybe brighten it up a bit?

    Otherwise I really like it :icon_thumbup:
  4. dot design

    dot design Member

    I'd also say its working well too, only thing I'd do (and you have probably done this already) is explore echoing the curves or shapes within the typeface in the TV symbol. The aerial looks a little spikey could it be slightly rounded if or adjusted?

    I think the colour palette is working well, love the "TRN it on" copyline. Overall good work!
  5. Steve_jurado

    Steve_jurado Guest

    Maybe consider working on the ariel as it's making the whole thing look like an upside down, rectangular speech bubble.
  6. designer01

    designer01 Member

    Overall, excellent designs. Maybe make the TV wider as it looks like an older TV and perhaps make the frame of the TV thinner. You could do a live trace in illustrator of a TV from a manual/catalogue. The colour schemes are very good, my favourite being the pink and blue colours. Great Ad but I would add an exclamation mark, could be a double entendre!


  7. designer01

    designer01 Member

    Double entendres could be something like...

    She TRNS me on!
    He TRNS me on!
    You TRN me on!


  8. dot design

    dot design Member

    Bucket of cold water for Greg please! :icon_biggrin:

    Good idea though!
  9. CYoung

    CYoung Member

    That made me laugh :icon_lol:

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