Anyone recommend any improvements on this?

Looks good, can you soften the lighting at all? not sure what options are in Cinema 4D but i would imagine you can soften the shadows and highlights. That might solves the issue.
 
doesnt look 2 bad, used 2 used 3D alot many moons ago, have u tried moving the lighting to diff locations so u have a shadow of the text on the floor behind the text, just an idea.
 
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