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Another Redesign

Discussion in 'Website Design Critique:' started by Timmo, Jan 22, 2009.

  1. Timmo

    Timmo Member

  2. Aarlev

    Aarlev Member

    I don't personally like the drop shadow on the 'forest advertising, business..' . I'd make it way more subtle or remove it completely. I think the typography could be a lot stronger as as well.

    Also I think you should place the 'to advertise with us..' text somewhere else than over the image and perhaps in a different font and color. And Instead of having the rounded corner you could cut out the moose (elk? :)) to make it more interesting than just a flat image?
     
  3. Timmo

    Timmo Member

    How about now?
     
  4. Aarlev

    Aarlev Member

    Much better in my opinion. But the image seems to be of pretty low quality. I think you need a really nice and sharp image when it's such a strong feature in the design. The typography is much better, but I'd move the header text slightly to the right so that the distance from the left edge is the same as from the top.


    EDIT: Woups, I clicked the link for the original the second time..lol :D Sorry about that mate. But yeah as you can probably guess, I prefer the original. :)
     

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