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Another Critique please!

Discussion in 'Website Design Critique:' started by chris_17, Jun 24, 2009.

  1. chris_17

    chris_17 Member


    You may remember I posted my initial design for my new site a few weeks ago, thanks for all of the pointers, I have changed the design completely (almost) and finished the homepage, here it is.

  2. DougBarned

    DougBarned Member

    The link appears dead :(
  3. CYoung

    CYoung Member

    Im getting a 404 error page :icon_scared:
  4. chris_17

    chris_17 Member

    Oops, should have updated the link, it's here now, working on another design though, so none of the pages are linked.
  5. DougBarned

    DougBarned Member

    I like it!

    I'm using Firefox 3 on mac and you have some alignment issues. I've attached an image - Contact me link intersects with border line and valid css in footer is moving off screen. I also get a white line at the bottom of the page. Probably because of the valid css link though.

    You have 1 code error <img src="images/6.png" width="74" height="80" /> (line 71, col 86) needs an alt and you have an extra } at the end of your typography.css file which could do funny things in some browsers.

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  6. i quite like it, but am a bit stumped by two things:

    - the nice white space turns grungy at the bottom...?
    - at the bottom of the page it says "these are the social networks i'm part of" and then gives a link to your RSS feed!

    Regarding the first point, your white space is nice, but I think it's downgraded a bit by the fact you convert that into grunge at the bottom...
  7. minkidesign

    minkidesign New Member

    Reviewing this from a pure visual point of view as I'm still getting to grips with the techie side, but it looks great! Very clear and bold, easy to read text. I love the white part of the page, but not to keen on the brown marbled effect at the bottom, then going into a black gradient. I think the black works, just not sure about the brown.

    Was also thinking - does the twitter feed need a headline? It's a little random on the page if someone didn't know that the blue bird represented twitter.

    But other than that I really like it, clear, easy to navigate and very professional! Well done :)

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