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A dress of words

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Lunera, Feb 2, 2010.

  1. Lunera

    Lunera Senior Member


    Here, a picture of a girl wearing a dress of words, maybe she could embody a kind of poetry. Some of these words and group of words come from a poem I have written lol. I'd like to know what you think about this creation. any suggestions : what I should erase, modify or add ? I don't know.
    I wonder if it could be nice to add colors.
    This is the first time that I do something like this, with typography.

  2. *chloe

    *chloe Junior Member

    I like it !
    Line work is good,
    like the effect of the letters at the bottom :D

    Try it with one other color to see how it looks
  3. mrp2049

    mrp2049 Senior Member

    I'd like to see the black toned down a little, maybe set the opacity a little lower or change the layer to overlay?

    But that is only if its on the textured background. Other than that, strong lines, nice piece.
  4. Lunera

    Lunera Senior Member

    Thank you. =)
    I tried to add colors, maybe I could add colors differently.


    and with an effect on the layer as you suggest, mrp.
  5. berry

    berry Active Member


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