Need critique on my website


New Member
Hello All, It would be great to get feedback on my website. I have created this site for charity purpose,
My website is
This is my 1st wordpress site, it would be good to get constructive feedback and ideas to improve.



Active Member
It seems to be broken:

Put the poems on the homepage. People who land on the site will onlly be there because they like poetry so don't hide away the content.

The forms are complicated. Just put it all into one form and add a donate checkbox. If this is checked on submission take them to paypal or whatever.