Need advice on a logo

[strdustelf]

Hi! I'm a design student and I would love some advice on how to improve this logo design for a Jazz bar & Bistro. Thanks in advance!

 

[Levi]

Um... it's very minimalist. I'm not sure the invisible look is quite what they're going for

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[jackleo]

Hi there, I'm newbie here, something similar on my mind about this logo