My posters (Up for critique)

Paul Murray

Ultimate Member
Hi there.

The first image seems very 'mish-mash'. The first block of text leads your eye to the of the poster, from there it has nowhere to go except off the page. Also the type doesn't seem to fit together and I can't really make out the first 'logo'. I don't know what 'atm' is and you're not telling me, which probably means I wouldn't go.

The second gives me a 404 error :/
 
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