My posters (Up for critique)

[TimMizon]

Hey guys,

Made a few posters for the Salvation Army, would like to see your view on them any improvements etc:


http://uploadir.com/u/0e178595
http://uploadir.com/u/6443482

Thank you.

 

[Paul Murray]

Hi there.

The first image seems very 'mish-mash'. The first block of text leads your eye to the of the poster, from there it has nowhere to go except off the page. Also the type doesn't seem to fit together and I can't really make out the first 'logo'. I don't know what 'atm' is and you're not telling me, which probably means I wouldn't go.

The second gives me a 404 error :/

 

[TimMizon]

The first poster is for a church orginisation and just wanted that information. Thanks though.

www.timmizon.com theres more there!