My Fashion Brand Logo

fawazalyagout

New Member
Hello to you all,
I am honored to be part of this community.

I have created a logo for a fashion brand for myself, using my own name. The aesthetic of the brand is minimalistic, chic, and timeless. I am pretty happy with the way the logo design looks so far. I have been refining and evolving it for a few years, as I never actually launched the brand officially yet. Note that I have been working on the design on my own and it is about time that I shared it with the right community to get some feedback and critique.

The concept behind the logo is to communicate the brand name (my name) through stylized yet minimalistic upper case letterforms in the most balanced and eye pleasing way possible. As my first name is placed above my last name, I enjoyed making mirroring effects between letters placed above each other. Notice how my first name FAWAZ has a lot of sharp angles, and zigzags, I made the W out of curvy shapes to lessen the sharpness, and create a mirror effect with the curves of QO of my last name underneath it. I also made the W wider than usual and made the QO overlap so as to make the double circles of the W and the QO equal in width to further add to the mirroring effect. On the other hand, my last name, it is Spelled ALYAQOUT. I replaced the U with a U with a V to add sharpness and mirror it with the A above it. Apart from that, I dropped the horizontal lines in the As and Fs to create a minimalistic effect.

Moreover, I figured that playing with kerning between the letters is a key factor to add to the aesthetic of the logo. By bringing the letters as close as possible, and sometimes even overlapping them into one another, I intend to create a balanced negative space between the black lines, and to make every element connected to the other. I also find it very pleasing as it reminds me of line art, which a key signature style of mine.
Other than that, in case you were wondering why the AL of my last name is smaller in size than the rest of my last name; that is because Al in Arabic is just a prefix commonly used for last names in our region. This is similar to Mc, Le, El, etc.

When it comes to legibility, it is important that the audience is able to identify the logo with the brand name, but I like a little bit of mystery. Which is why I do not mind the altered letterforms as they add individuality to the brand. I personally don't see it as very hard to read to tell that what is written is actually Fawaz AlYaqout. Especially that nowadays, with social media accounts and websites, one can easily know how a brand name is actually spelled, and they can figure out pronunciation on their own. A lot of legendary and highly successful fashion brand names are not pronounced the right way throughout the world, and that is because the designers behind these brands come from diverse cultures.

I hope I covered most of the important points about the story of this logo and how it came about. I would highly appreciate it any feedback or input of any kind. What do you think of the kerning? what shall I add or remove? And what do you think of the concept behind the logo in general?

Thank you and peace
 

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hankscorpio

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It doesn't read properly at all. I think you missed the mark here slightly.

Look at CK, ZARA, TH, GAULTIER etc.

All clean lines, easy to read.

There's no need to get complex.
Keep it simple.
 

fawazalyagout

New Member
It doesn't read properly at all. I think you missed the mark here slightly.

Look at CK, ZARA, TH, GAULTIER etc.

All clean lines, easy to read.

There's no need to get complex.
Keep it simple.
Thank you for sharing your perspective. I was obviously in need of a fresh perspective on things
 

Wardy

Well-Known Member
The very fact that you need all those words to explain your 'logo' and it's taken you a few years, is proof that it just doesn't work I'm afraid. It's only when I looked at your name
that I realised what it spelled. Do some research, like Hank says, and just keep it very simple and don't try to be clever.
 

fawazalyagout

New Member
The very fact that you need all those words to explain your 'logo' and it's taken you a few years, is proof that it just doesn't work I'm afraid. It's only when I looked at your name
that I realised what it spelled. Do some research, like Hank says, and just keep it very simple and don't try to be clever.
TRUE!
I’ll do that.
Thank you
 

Spellbrand

New Member
Too futuristic in terms of the custom font. While the idea is a good one, readability - especially when you have so many letters in the logo is paramount. Style comes second. You can still take the same idea - abstract lettering to create a unique design - and tone down the abstraction of the letters so it becomes more legible.
 
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