Logo & website homepage design

[josdsn]

Hi,

I'm trying to design a logo for a self directed project, an artist management company called 'O'Sullivan Music', something that represents strength power and reliability.

http://i1337.photobucket.com/albums/o675/johnodesign/OSM_Perspective5-01_zps9d65fcb4.png

The logo is the cube including shadow and the image I've uploaded is an idea for a possible homepage for the website when finished.

Any feedback and suggestions for changes or improvements would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks

 

[Arthur]

Hi,

The concept of the design is cool. I like the idea of using the cube although I think you could look into working on the gradient of the grey or potentially use half tone dots to create a more interesting 'fade'. have you thought about using another colour rather than just black white and grey? A highlight colour could help boost the look of the design maybe?

I would be happy to help you with a design at no cost other than the rights to use the image in my portfolio.

Please drop me a PM if your interested with a bit more info on the project

Cheers Arthur

 

[josdsn]

Hi,

The concept of the design is cool. I like the idea of using the cube although I think you could look into working on the gradient of the grey or potentially use half tone dots to create a more interesting 'fade'. have you thought about using another colour rather than just black white and grey? A highlight colour could help boost the look of the design maybe?

I would be happy to help you with a design at no cost other than the rights to use the image in my portfolio.

Please drop me a PM if your interested with a bit more info on the project

Cheers Arthur

Hi Arthur,

I purposely designed in b&w to try to achieve something simplistic and distinctive before adding colour but I'd be really interested to see what you can add to it, will pm you.

I felt the need to add a musical element to it as its a music management company so I've added some alternating fading dots in place of the shadow to represent audio level meters and/or waveforms, see attached image or link below, which ever works... further feedback would be greatly appreciated!

http://i1337.photobucket.com/albums/o675/johnodesign/Logo Design/OSM_Logo-02_zpsae2b35c7.png

 

[Fruitbat]

Id use a more solid square typeface. I don't like the way helvetica sits within the spaces.
100% id try a different type choice and go from there. Id also just make the type black and create the cube from the type & ditch the solid cube.

 

[josdsn]

Id use a more solid square typeface. I don't like the way helvetica sits within the spaces.
100% id try a different type choice and go from there. Id also just make the type black and create the cube from the type & ditch the solid cube.

I see what you mean, something about the cube and typeface wasn't really sitting right with me either, thanks for the advice, will try it out