Hey Jake, welcome to the forums
I think as a graphic title or banner it's ok, I can see that you made the words have the plastic vinyl look to it but you need to do more at the moment it's a record next to the text. They sit side by side but you could integrate the record into the text. Either by replacing the O in Studios (Studio's?) or some other way.
You could also try and make the record look less like a record, at the moment it looks like it could be part of a clipart collection, which is fine for clipart but could you make it a little more abstract?
With having the name as it is, any kind of circular image would be recognised as a record don't you think?
How will this be used? Website\Print?