In need of CRITIQUE

[Mercury98]

Hi all i'm fairly new to the logo design business
a few months after getting my wacom tablet for drawing i gave logo design a try and i loved the process
so i started doing a few more here and there and in the next 6 months i got the opportunity to do 4 paid jobs.
i love the industry and i would love get some criticism to help me improve , ty.

 

[Get Canvas]

I like your designs. my favourite is the more detailed tomato design Lyca Logo 1. Ive not seen that style logo in a while. I cant criticize anything, their brilliant. good job.

 

[Paul Murray]

The text in each of these is quite unbalanced and small. I'd try and make it bigger so the whole logo can be read at smaller scales. I'd try and simplify everything a bit too so they work in a single colour. The pale blue lines in the prawn's fins, for example, why not produce them as a cut out instead of a solid line. I'd recommend working only in a single colour when you're designing to force yourself to keep things simple and clean.

 

[Mercury98]

Thx for the advice and the nice words