illustrative logo thoughts!

Paul Murray

Ultimate Member
The second one is pretty illegible. It's quite dark and it's hard to make out the shape with the extra elements behind it.


New Member
ah okay ! - thanks - i was aiming for a dark scene , just so you can you make out whats behind it (the rocks and transparent copy) - and leave the rest down to the colours.

Sam Cowley

I like the abstract shape you have, I would agree with it being the second image is slightly darker than what it should be. If you want it to be dark I suggest having an outer glow effect around the shape so you can distinguish what and where the shape is in the image. Hope this helps! :)