Hi, can you guys check out my works and critique them? Thanks

[Mateo]

Hi, I am a small designer and I need a critique by professionals. You can see my work on my Behance profile.

Mateo Jurin - Graphic Designer / Photographer, Student in Zadar, Croatia

Hi, I am an individual who wants to explore the universe of creativity. Graduated high school in Croatia as a graphic designer.

www.behance.net

 

[hankscorpio]

We can.
But you'll have to post the pieces you want us to critique directly to the forum.

Thanks

 

[Mateo]

 

[sprout]

… and with some sort of context would be useful, otherwise we can only judge how pretty, or not they are. What was problem to be solved? Who is the I ntended audience? etc. ie, the brief you worked from in order to do them in the first place.

 

[hankscorpio]

It's difficult without context. There's no call to action.
There's small text on the side that is difficult to read.
The clipping paths/cutouts are not done very well.

Other than that - they look visually appealing to me - but that's personal aesthetic rather any useful critique.

 

[Getseowebsite]

Good efforts!
Make your content more visible
make image simple and impressive

 

[Nindja1]

Nice work! You need to make the wording a bit more visible. It needs better visibility.