Critique my pattern designs please!

mrmomoart

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What do you think about these patterns I've designed? When I designed these patterns, I didn't want to print them on a particular thing, such as a mug, wrapping paper, clothes, and so on.
I just wanted to design them to take my first steps and to learn more.
 

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Wardy

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Those look a bit too 'clumpy' for me ie, clumps of leaves rather than a pattern as such. Colour balance could be better too.

I know you've gone for a hand-drawn style, but they look a little too naive for me, a bit rough around the edges and poorly-coloured in some cases. Maybe do the originals a bit bigger
or try doing them as vectors to get a crisper line and flatter colours.

The one with the hares on your other post is quite good, that's the only one I would potentially use.
 
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