Critique my 2 logos


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Just some logos, tell me what you think. I personally think one is too complex but hey, give your opinion!

Regards , Alan Brook
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#1 doesn't work at all in black & white, that's for sure. Pretty, but not effective for business/corporate applications. :)
I agree with Mark, #1 looks nice but isn't practical, #2 is much better but looks like it would be better suited to a music orientated business than graphic design, the 4 vertical bars remind me of the bars in a graphic equaliser.
Thanks for the replies guys , basically with the first one it's what i thought. But thought it would be nice to put it up. Thanks guys
Hi Alan

I agree with Boss and Mark regarding the first one, the second works better but I think there are too many elements, I'd simplify it