TheNoone Member May 15, 2010 #1 I'm Just days away from finisihing my online portfolio. I'd like a bit of critique on my own logo if it is'nt too much trouble. Personally i am happy with it. What do you guys think? Much love Kyle :icon_notworthy: Last edited: May 15, 2010
I'm Just days away from finisihing my online portfolio. I'd like a bit of critique on my own logo if it is'nt too much trouble. Personally i am happy with it. What do you guys think? Much love Kyle :icon_notworthy:
CYoung Member May 15, 2010 #2 Doesn't really appeal to me I'm afraid. Possibly too big as the 3 is a little overpowering and I don't think it shows off your creativity enough.
Doesn't really appeal to me I'm afraid. Possibly too big as the 3 is a little overpowering and I don't think it shows off your creativity enough.
Minuteman Press Active Member May 15, 2010 #3 Not a fan. Even if it's a 'Young Girl-Old Woman' style illusion - the guy is looking east! Not clear also what 'graphic design and advertising' is. Perhaps merge the disciplines? Sorry, just not a style I like. Test the logo on clients and ask for feedback.
Not a fan. Even if it's a 'Young Girl-Old Woman' style illusion - the guy is looking east! Not clear also what 'graphic design and advertising' is. Perhaps merge the disciplines? Sorry, just not a style I like. Test the logo on clients and ask for feedback.
SparkCreative Member May 18, 2010 #5 It's a it overcomplicated - the shadow technique could work but it needs cleaning up a bit and maybe making a little thicker? Graphic design and advertising are two separate disciplines and should NOT be merged. It's like saying web design and photography are the same thing. But do lose the Caps On Every Word In The Strapline. Or make it all uppercase.
It's a it overcomplicated - the shadow technique could work but it needs cleaning up a bit and maybe making a little thicker? Graphic design and advertising are two separate disciplines and should NOT be merged. It's like saying web design and photography are the same thing. But do lose the Caps On Every Word In The Strapline. Or make it all uppercase.
TheNoone Member May 18, 2010 #6 I've now scrapped this! I just wanted to see if it could work and it clearly doesnt, thanks for the crit though!
I've now scrapped this! I just wanted to see if it could work and it clearly doesnt, thanks for the crit though!