Packaging is next to impossible to critique without it being mocked up. Can you do some mock ups? I think overall set 3 is the strongest. I would simplify the background.
Think a little about visual contrast. Big vs. Small, Thin vs. Thick ect. Right now everything has the same "Visual weight" to it. Then when you have a design YOU like start taking things away from it one by one until you cant remove anything else. Think about how the logo will look...
Think of how your logo will look in a black or a white silhouette. You should still have a interesting shape. These will be black or white circles. Like others have said I would fill up three or four pages of a sketch book. If I could any advice on what's here it would be to take the GD of...
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