Recent content by charlieallen

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    My portfolio

    Thank you for the feedback, its really appreciated. I have done logos which ill upload later on, ill admit i'm not the best at logos at the moment but i'm working on them, i've got a lot more stuff to go up. I do agree i have to work on a lot more stuff such as logos, brochures etc so ill...
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    My portfolio

    Flickr: charlieallendesigns' Photostream Hey, this is my portfolio, im still updating it. If you could have a look and give a little feedback that would be great, nothing to detailed but just an overlook. I dont know anyone else who could give me a "professional" opinion, so any...
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    Personal Identity/Business Card Critique

    It looks a tad like a design u would see on a washing up product. I do like the type, maybe your contact details can be at the same angle as the rest of the type :)
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    Logo Crit Please. Thanks

    I like, i personally think thats the best logo and i like the font aswell :icon_biggrin:
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    Logo Crit Please. Thanks

    As everyones said before me, i like the concept and i do like the 2 balloons with the little stars aswell. The font reminds me of a 50s? french cafe, i don't know why lol. The one thing i really dislike (sorry) is the gradient on the box, i don't think it needs to be there, maybe just have...
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    Poster Design

    I like the idea, but the writing at the bottom needs to be a different colour as its hard to read, it also looks very gender specific (female) which might discourage the younger males to really give it time to look at it. I do like the design though, maybe just move the letters around abit...
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    Concept Architecture

    I like the fact its spacious, you dont want to be in a place filled with dreary brick walls everywhere you look. For the top image, could you maybe create that in a semi circle with a circle area in the middle with a fountain and some seating areas, it would be a nice relaxing place to visit...
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    Logo Design

    I like this, nice and simple, but i agree with nyanko, the kite definitly needs motion, because your slogan says 'make your dreams fly' you want people to see a kite flying, because that kite could just be laying on the ground. Might sound a bit silly and picky but thats what i got from it.
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    Personal logo

    Thank you for the replys, ive gone back to the drawing bored now andi m having a look at what else i could do with it. I found it hard to think of something using CA and make it look like a logo, and a bit unique, i didnt even consider that it looked like the peace sign. Ill get back to it...
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    Personal logo

    well when its smaller, i use 3 dots instead of 2 with my name, because i realised it didnt look very good smaller. I quite like the fact the circle worked with the C, thought it was qwerky, but nevermind Thank you for the feedback!
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    Personal logo

    Hi guys, im new to this forum but it looks great from what i can see so far, i have designed my new logo not so long ago and was wondering what people thought of it. Let me know :) http://ideal-productions.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d2ww6l0
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