Sometimes when your key idea doesn't work it's always good to explore another way. The old paper effect works fine but the visual is too light. Think about the important things onto you poster Title / date / where does it takes place. A kind of hierarchy to help you understand what is the...
You need something with more punch, actually it's not really inviting and between us the goal of this poster is clearly to invite people no? Deformation of the text looks a little bit strange to me. It is a deformation or maybe hand lettering here??
@Paul Murray : Initially, I supposed to make it in color but finally I think B&W it's a better option for kids and for a restaurant better in term of cost no?
@Wardy :
Not sure about this one but
you're completely right for this part ;)
I never heard about origami or Boxshot but I've already worked with Google ketchup at school for creating some custom furnitures for example and the tool is really simple to manipulate and really powerful.
the problem here it's not the fact that your design looks empty I think you need to change the color palette to have something more harmonious. If all that you need is here why searching to add some new things?
If I can say something more:
- reduce the size of your "cross box"
-replace the...
+1 for me it's not a logo...But it's a common mistake. You didn't think about it as a logo, as something to really represent your company. Here you take different element and past them together to create something more or less attractive to the eyes.
the gradient it's not a good choice if you...
Hey thanks guy's!!!
I will take every of your comments under consideration. For this one I would like to ink it in a traditional way but for the color part it will be digital(i think). At the end I want in term of mood....something dark, I don't know how to explain exactly... Night sky but...
Hi guy's long time no see!
I'm actually working on my first hand lettering project. I am more and more interested about the subject so after a few videos on skill share i've started this little project and naturally i'm here to find some advices and comments to help me improve this piece.
I...
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