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Old 07-14-2010, 02:15 PM   #1
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Hi,

Eventually getting the time to start my new site, this is my 4th attempt at getting it done, this is todays effort, what do you think, ignore code, it is far from finished.

Just wanted to get another opinion.

Chris Borrowdale — Designer

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Briefly:
  • Nicely laid out.
  • Could do with some extra left padding in your contact form labels & your submit button is tiny.
  • All seems a little monotone, nothing really grabs you as important as it doesn't stand out (except the underlined links in your greeting. Your logo seems particularly unimportant - almost blurry on that background.

So yeh, I like it, but it's lacking anything to give it that punch. Needs some contrast.

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  • but it's lacking anything to give it that punch. Needs some contrast.
I agree with the above
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Also, although it's a beautiful font, try not to use Museo on every job.
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Thanks, I'm working on adding some more colour.

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Museo isn't used.
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