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Still need to upload some contents. but design wise it has been completed. This site try to meet specific needs for a central London landlord of student accommodation.
Appreciate your Critiques, especially the specifics. <a href="http://www.imperialaccommodation.co.uk/"> http://www.imperialaccommodation.co.uk</a> info@adword-success.com Last edited by tomt; 07-14-2009 at 04:34 PM. |
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Minor thing, but I would change the index page title from...
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<title>central London accommodation for students, student accommodation in central London</title> Code:
<title>Student accommodation in Central London</title> |
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Looks ok, however I would loose the flash icons at the bottom of the page, just use normal images. Also the text on the other pages needs to be sorted, I would reduce the size and increase the line height.
Reduce your keywords you only need a few tbh, and the description should actually be a description of your website, incase a search engine can't find any relevant text, they'll use that instead. Make sure your Meta 'NAME' is in lower case and 'CONTENT'. You need to add alt attributes for accessibility on your images. Watch your ampersands! should be & not just &
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On the whole, it looks ok..... just a few things, like chris said, lose the flash images.
Not sure if I'm too keen on the logo and header. There is a broken effect in the stripes around the nav tabs (I'm viewing in chrome) |
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Hi,
The site looks okay. If anything I'd increase the line height or reduce the size of the text slightly. At the moment the lines look a little too close and it makes it a little uncomfortable to read. Other than that it is simple, clean and you can easily find the accomodation Andy Lighthouse DM |
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I think it does the job and I like your layout.. but your page is a bit too light on my screen. If i didnt have good eye site I prolly wouldnt be able to read it as well. students can be all ages! and maybe sharpen up your images I also think light gray with white it not very readable!! well on my screen anyways and you have to think about everyone when design a site! other than that I like it
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a new website just launched, critique please
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