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Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by steadman, Jul 9, 2009.

  1. steadman

    steadman New Member




    I have just graduated from a Graphic design HND and I am creating some work for my resume.

    These posters are a work in progress.

    Can tell you me what you like and what you don't, so that I may improve the work.

  2. LovesPrint

    LovesPrint Member

    Can you give us a bit more background? what's the brief and purpose of them?
  3. Not knowing the background et al. the middle image has some potential. I'd try:
    A different font - something with a bit more flow and eligance, to emulate the movement of the dancers
    A different colour - Green is ok, but it looks like a standard pallette choice of an rgb colour in an cmyk document.
    A bit of transparency... may be? on the text? ?
    The text treatment is a bit static
  4. steadman

    steadman New Member


    You wanted to know the background, basically this is an experiment with typography, that I intend to use to replace some posters in my portfolio. I deceided to create 3 Tango posters, because I wanted to approach the same subject from slightly different angles. I think perhaps they are to much alike.
  5. steadman

    steadman New Member

    They are an experient for my portfolo, wanted look at same subject 3 different ways, they are to much alike.

    thanks for the critique

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