Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by imjava, Sep 28, 2013.
This is my newest design, what do you think about this?
I think your spelling is awful, do you have spell check in word? Maybe worth giving it a once over
Spelling in the banner???
grammar would be more accurate in my opinion but either way.... it needs work
Oh yes,I'm not very well in English
That's fine we have several other members who aren't native english speakers.
Would you like us to help point you in the right direction with the errors we see in the way your image is worded?
working on a line by line basis top to bottom, this would be how I would word it
BUDGET WEB HOSTING
Starts at $0.50 per month
Trusted by more than
Guarantee [color=#ff0000;](this was not included in original)[/color]
And as a side note, why not introduce your self here if you haven't already done so
Thanks a lot
But banners text sent by customer and I never wrote it
This banners owner is from canada
This is my newest design.
What do you think about this??
Wow, they're really in your face. I guess that's what they're meant to be though. I'm not keen on the flashing Click Here. That hurts my eyes
Hi imjava it really would be nice to see you introduce yourself, and to tell us about your story!
They aren't too bad, a bit in your face as Tony said, but that's what they're meant to do right? Although you have to question whether it's going to be very effective, forcing peoples eyes to look where they don't want to! I think most people just filter these types of graphics out nowadays.
Have you considered doing any other type of graphic design?
tnx a lot
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