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What do you think about this??!!

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by imjava, Sep 28, 2013.

  1. imjava

    imjava New Member

    Hi all
    This is my newest design, what do you think about this?
    [​IMG]
     
  2. I think your spelling is awful, do you have spell check in word? Maybe worth giving it a once over :)
     
  3. imjava

    imjava New Member

    Spelling in the banner???
     
  4. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    grammar would be more accurate in my opinion but either way.... it needs work
     
  5. imjava

    imjava New Member

    Oh yes,I'm not very well in English
    Sorry everyone
     
  6. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    That's fine we have several other members who aren't native english speakers.
    Would you like us to help point you in the right direction with the errors we see in the way your image is worded?
     
  7. imjava

    imjava New Member

    yes sure
    tnx
     
  8. Levi

    Levi Moderator Staff Member

    working on a line by line basis top to bottom, this would be how I would word it
    BUDGET WEB HOSTING
    Starts at $0.50 per month
    Trusted by more than
    30 customers
    14 Days
    Money Back
    Guarantee [color=#ff0000;](this was not included in original)[/color]
    NO HELP
    HOSTING INC

    web address


    And as a side note, why not introduce your self here if you haven't already done so :)
     
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  9. imjava

    imjava New Member

    Thanks a lot
    But banners text sent by customer and I never wrote it
    This banners owner is from canada
    Thanks again
     
  10. imjava

    imjava New Member

    [​IMG]
    This is my newest design.
    What do you think about this??
     
  11. Tony Hardy

    Tony Hardy Guest

    Wow, they're really in your face. I guess that's what they're meant to be though. I'm not keen on the flashing Click Here. That hurts my eyes :(
     
  12. Hi imjava it really would be nice to see you introduce yourself, and to tell us about your story!
    They aren't too bad, a bit in your face as Tony said, but that's what they're meant to do right? Although you have to question whether it's going to be very effective, forcing peoples eyes to look where they don't want to! I think most people just filter these types of graphics out nowadays.
    Have you considered doing any other type of graphic design?
     
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  13. imjava

    imjava New Member

    tnx a lot
     

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