edgar101084
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I'm making a postal service logo and can't decide what else to add and if the colors are okay. Does it seem to blah and need something more?
What am I missing?
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scotty
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To me, I did read "SPEEDY" but after the seed was sewn then I can't un-see "PEEDY" now.
I'm actually liking the concept with the speed lines on the S but maybe to make it all read together then you could try making the PEEDY look a little more in line with the S?
The S appears to be kind of italicised and leaning or moving forward so maybe by doing the same with the rest may make it read properly.
Also, I see that the S has rounded ends where as the rest are square like a 'but cap' line.
I'm actually liking the concept with the speed lines on the S but maybe to make it all read together then you could try making the PEEDY look a little more in line with the S?
The S appears to be kind of italicised and leaning or moving forward so maybe by doing the same with the rest may make it read properly.
Also, I see that the S has rounded ends where as the rest are square like a 'but cap' line.
Joey3537
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Woah! Not bad at all. I love the little character! Did you make him?
Personally, I like the S concept. It communicates the message the logo stands for. However, Scotty does make a good point. You should stay consistent with your font style. Also, I would bring in the charter a little closer to the font, as I feel like there's too much empty space.
Excellent choice of the colors by the way!
Personally, I like the S concept. It communicates the message the logo stands for. However, Scotty does make a good point. You should stay consistent with your font style. Also, I would bring in the charter a little closer to the font, as I feel like there's too much empty space.
Excellent choice of the colors by the way!