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Portfolio review

Discussion in 'Website Design Critique:' started by seeligo, Nov 29, 2010.

  1. seeligo

    seeligo New Member

    Hi everyone,

    I've just joined and was wondering if I could get some feedback on my portfolio...
    www.eleanorseelig.co.uk

    Any constructive criticism would be great!

    Thanks
     
  2. Paul Murray

    Paul Murray Moderator Staff Member

    Welcome :)

    A couple of things I noticed. Firstly, the 'My Flickr Pics' box is too far to the right for my liking, but that's just a designer's eye I think. Also, the images in the feed didn't seem to be too relevant to your work? New Zealand looks beautiful though, but that's not what I was there for ;)

    Secondly, I wasn't sure at first how to view your portfolio. The link on the right wasn't immediately obvious and I found myself waiting for the scrolling posts to change so I could view your work. Perhaps they should link to your portfolio page as the blurb does instead of the individual posts? :)
     
  3. Dave L

    Dave L Well-Known Member

    My immediate impression on following the portfolio link was that the copy on the site isn't great considering you're offering copywriting as a service: "Last winter's harsh winter ...", "... primarily for customers and but also for staff"... I'm sure it's just typos and oversights but I think people would expect a bit more attention to detail.
     
  4. Dave L

    Dave L Well-Known Member

    ... otherwise some nice work; some of the typography isn't to my taste but that's not to say it's inappropriate or anything.
     
  5. seeligo

    seeligo New Member

    Thanks for your comments. I never seem to have enough time to concentrate on this fully. Definitely some food for thought, cheers!
     

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