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Personal Logo for Critique

Discussion in 'Graphic Design & Logo Design Critique:' started by Silviu, Mar 19, 2015.

  1. Silviu

    Silviu New Member

    Hi Guys,

    I am currently trying to develop my logo and personal branding assets.

    Bellow find attached one version of my logo. I would like to get your opinion on this.

    Untitled-1.jpg logo_preview.jpg

    Thanks in advance.
     
  2. Wardy

    Wardy Active Member

    What does it say?!

    Seriously, it's not very legible. Design-wise, to me it looks like a designer clothes label or something for hair products.
     
  3. Silviu

    Silviu New Member

    It says "Silviu" which is my first name. I chose the script style to give it a retro feel and to match my personality. A while ago I found few resources stating that a script/signature logo will connect better with the audience, I tried to incorporate that as well.

    Thanks for the comment.
     
  4. Wardy

    Wardy Active Member

    Maybe you can adapt it to make it more legible. At the moment it looks like Silvu with a dot over it. Not keen on the 'v' either, it's almost an 'o'.

    Either way, it doesn't say graphic designer to me.
     
  5. hankscorpio

    hankscorpio Moderator Staff Member

    I thought it said Silvia.
     
  6. Paul Murray

    Paul Murray Moderator Staff Member

    I now know what it says but still can't figure out the mark. Might be time to try another option, though you might be surprised to find you don't need a 'personal logo'. I've managed alright without one for over 4 years. :icon_biggrin:
     
  7. @GCarlD

    @GCarlD Well-Known Member

    I can relate lol
     
  8. graphicart

    graphicart New Member

    What are u branding ? Is it a product ?
     
  9. PriyeshDesign

    PriyeshDesign Member

    Self-branding is always difficult to perfect.

    You could perhaps experiment with alternative script fonts. Just remember branding is also about 'clarity'.
     
  10. Silviu

    Silviu New Member

    Thanks a lot for the feedback.

    I will go with a simpler approach, probably away from the script fonts.
     

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