Hi Stephen,
First thing that comes to my mind is that It really needs some contrast and a more clear separation of elements. Also I'm not sure the typography used in the content goes with the more futuristic feel of your logo. Mixing Sans-serifs with Serifs can definitely work, but here I think it clashes too much.
There are a lot of other things that could use some tweaking, but I'd try to nail the creative direction and vibe/feel of it before going into the smaller details and refining it.
Just my 2 cents, hope it helps in some way!
Thanks,
Soren